Sin's Iniquity
I wanted to like this story and, actually, I like the idea of the story. It has all of the elements of a great book. Unfortunately, the editing and sentence structure in this book are amazingly horrible. I read 31% of the book and had to stop. There were sentences that made no sense because of the order the words were in.
I think that this author has great potential. She just needs an editor because this felt like a very rough first draft.
DNF
